I've only given the game the most cursory of looks so far, but one thing that leapt right off the page at me: The ages of Donald, Nellie and Raymond don't sync up very well. Even assuming Nellie was 32 when she died a year ago (and she would thus be 33 if she were still alive), if Raymond is 21, then Donald was 16 and Nellie was TWELVE (12) when Raymond was born.
That completely hadn't crossed my mind. Since Nellie isn't alive anymore, I pretty much put very little thought into her age and arbitrarily put her much younger than Donald. Then I scaled Donald's age back some and moved up Raymond's age and then ... well, I should have thought about it. Thanks, I'll update some numbers on the next build.
I've only given the game the most cursory of looks so far, but one thing that leapt right off the page at me: The ages of Donald, Nellie and Raymond don't sync up very well. Even assuming Nellie was 32 when she died a year ago (and she would thus be 33 if she were still alive), if Raymond is 21, then Donald was 16 and Nellie was TWELVE (12) when Raymond was born.
ReplyDeleteThat completely hadn't crossed my mind. Since Nellie isn't alive anymore, I pretty much put very little thought into her age and arbitrarily put her much younger than Donald. Then I scaled Donald's age back some and moved up Raymond's age and then ... well, I should have thought about it. Thanks, I'll update some numbers on the next build.
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